Big idea: Wreck it ralph is a arcade game character.He wears a farmers cloke like thing and is strong as a gorilla.He wears a really really old red farmers cloke with a broken strap like thing and is a Villain but as well as good guy, in the arcade he is the biggest and bulky like a bull and is awesomely awesome he is very dirty and dusty
Feed back: You did good because you put a lot of descriptive words in it. Brennan.
Feed forward: Next time you could make it longer so it is more interesting. Brennan.
Evaluation:I think I could of dicribe Ralph a bit more